ooc meme stolen from campjesus

[sandandwater]

This is the "how's my driving?" meme.

So, I don't know anyone who doesn't feel like they aren't getting enough feedback. So... let's give some. What do you like about my pup? What do you think could be improved? What things about them do you not understand that you'd like elaborated on?

Comments

[sand-andwater.livejournal.com]

You just nailed my biggest issue with Pippa. She IS Ro's girlfriend and not much else. Part of this is simply what she was created for and then fleshed out as I've gone along. (Meaning: You are SO Right) And part of it is intentional on Pippa's part--if that makes any sense.

She is content (or was preIck) to blend in and not be noticed. She doesn't like to discuss her past which is how a lot of people tend to get to know each other (shared experiences and exchange of information and so on). Without going into tl;dr territory (because typing like this is a pain) this is where people like Paul come into play. He's safe. (funny that anyone sees Paul as the one they can turn to for warm fuzzies in a sense). He doesn't live near her or know the people she knows and therefore, she can open up and be honest with him in a way she isn't with everyone in NYC.

Oh, look...still wordy. Basically, yes...Pippa has issues. I am trying to find ways to correct them through character growth. Nice that I pick a serial killer to address this stuff, huh?

Would love to hear your thoughts on how that gets handled and if I miss the mark or over-correct.

[zippyknowsbest.livejournal.com]

Oooh, very interesting angle with Pippa's defense-mechanism stuff there. I volunteer Paul to talk with her whenever, in the interests of character growth. :P

I'll be watchin'! And seeing what happens!

[sand-andwater.livejournal.com]

Thing is, I'm not so sure what she is being defensive about. Is she hiding her past because of guilt/shame/fear or some combination of all that? I know she doesn't want the people she has in her life now to judge her for what she was then: a spoiled, rich, naive ball of sheltered privilege.

feel free to ever smack me if she falls into Sue-land. I will have to set her on fire.

[zippyknowsbest.livejournal.com]

*laughs* Of course the ironic part there might be that of my three muses, Paul is probably the closest to knowing she was at least rich and probably sheltered. Silly perceptive muse. See, Pippa? Not that bad!

Oh, I doubt she'll ever be a Sue. I just wanna see more what makes her tick et cetera.

[sand-andwater.livejournal.com]

Will definitely get to see more of her ticking as I deal with more of her glass making and of course dealing with the mess I just inflicted on her.

Oh Paul...someone else that understands walking the harder path that most people wouldn't choose by default.